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Poem about my Eyes
Here is a poem I happened to write (Non-rhyming) in my free time:
My eyes are hazel and blank
Staring at the phoenix's back
Daydreaming the waves at sea
The calm brush of a fiery breath
Just waiting to see me
In the blanket's shadow
I crawl like a sneaky bug
Waiting for sundown to end
What i see with my eyes
My eyes are no other than me
In the woods, on a plane, in a desert
My eyes are my eyes everyhere I go
My eyes are hazel and blank
Staring at the phoenix's back
Daydreaming the waves at sea
The calm brush of a fiery breath
Just waiting to see me
In the blanket's shadow
I crawl like a sneaky bug
Waiting for sundown to end
What i see with my eyes
My eyes are no other than me
In the woods, on a plane, in a desert
My eyes are my eyes everyhere I go
Re: Poem about my Eyes
Heres a marvelous poem I had to write within 5 minutes in Lit today.
Hot, bright wick glowing evermore
Flowing into a pool of warm august
Roaming without freedom
It wanders the vicinity of it's captive home
I suck at writing poems
I should just give up
But it was a participation grade
So I needed to do it
So I did
There was more
But I don't remember it
So, yeah...
Hot, bright wick glowing evermore
Flowing into a pool of warm august
Roaming without freedom
It wanders the vicinity of it's captive home
I suck at writing poems
I should just give up
But it was a participation grade
So I needed to do it
So I did
There was more
But I don't remember it
So, yeah...
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Soy un perdedor
Im a loser baby, so why dont you kill me?
Im a loser baby, so why dont you kill me?
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Here's one i wrote years ago about a guy who confronts a man that framed him. The guy who go framed was rich and happy prior, and the guy who framed was poor and sad prior, so they basically switched roles. This was the sequel to another poem i wrote. Never finished it though...and the guy confronting the guy who framed him and made him lose his happy life is the one speaking
Edit: The guy framed him with robbery, just to let you know. It would make sense if i posted part 1 first..but i already did that at some point on here.
Do you remember me, because I remember you
If I had just one penny, I would’ve looked to sue
You don’t even know the pain that I’ve gone through
All the pain you have caused, and my rage is about due
Now that we are both familiar with that day
I have a lot on my mind I want to say
Hoping to bounce back on the great life of high pay
But nothing would ever go my way
Life used to be appreciated; it was at its best
All the weight from my childhood was lifted off my
chest
Now I am all alone, an egg that fell off its nest
And I’m stuck with the druggies, smokin pot and using
meth
I look for food; look for any scraps I can find
Or took food that was not even mine
I don’t got no money, not even a dime
I have no where to go, not even one sign
I looked for any job, but nothing in sight
I can’t even think, and forgot how to write
People laughing at me when the day is bright
Livin In the cold that I can hardly bare at night
I never knew life could have been this hard
Looken at the year after this whole thing started
All I wanted was to help you look towards the stars
But I ended up in that cell looken at those god damn
bars
I miss my family and my wife’s smile
I want them back in my life but I know their in denial
I miss my life, I was ridin in style
But now I can’t cause I have a criminal file
Maybe my life is going through a phase
Trying to get through this confusing maze
Got to get up off my feet and stop playing these games
Just like I have been for the past few days
Maybe my life has always been sore
Thinking of the past, I always wanted more
People delivering stuff right to my door
Livin like a star in the mid-ocean floor
I know our lives were never the same
I used to live every day in fame
Flying first class in one of them high powered planes
Never had to suffer any kind of pain
How is it that my life has turned around
Livin in the streets of a small empty town
It might not look as bad as it sounds
But look when its pouring and the thunder pounds
My life is empty, my soul has been devoured
As my body crumbles, and my evil is empowered
All because of you….you fuckin coward
But why would you care, your life has not shattered
Now I spend every day with agonizing pain
Yankin shards of glass right out of my veins
Pealing skin that has already been slain
And those damn insects just drivin me insane
Edit: The guy framed him with robbery, just to let you know. It would make sense if i posted part 1 first..but i already did that at some point on here.
Do you remember me, because I remember you
If I had just one penny, I would’ve looked to sue
You don’t even know the pain that I’ve gone through
All the pain you have caused, and my rage is about due
Now that we are both familiar with that day
I have a lot on my mind I want to say
Hoping to bounce back on the great life of high pay
But nothing would ever go my way
Life used to be appreciated; it was at its best
All the weight from my childhood was lifted off my
chest
Now I am all alone, an egg that fell off its nest
And I’m stuck with the druggies, smokin pot and using
meth
I look for food; look for any scraps I can find
Or took food that was not even mine
I don’t got no money, not even a dime
I have no where to go, not even one sign
I looked for any job, but nothing in sight
I can’t even think, and forgot how to write
People laughing at me when the day is bright
Livin In the cold that I can hardly bare at night
I never knew life could have been this hard
Looken at the year after this whole thing started
All I wanted was to help you look towards the stars
But I ended up in that cell looken at those god damn
bars
I miss my family and my wife’s smile
I want them back in my life but I know their in denial
I miss my life, I was ridin in style
But now I can’t cause I have a criminal file
Maybe my life is going through a phase
Trying to get through this confusing maze
Got to get up off my feet and stop playing these games
Just like I have been for the past few days
Maybe my life has always been sore
Thinking of the past, I always wanted more
People delivering stuff right to my door
Livin like a star in the mid-ocean floor
I know our lives were never the same
I used to live every day in fame
Flying first class in one of them high powered planes
Never had to suffer any kind of pain
How is it that my life has turned around
Livin in the streets of a small empty town
It might not look as bad as it sounds
But look when its pouring and the thunder pounds
My life is empty, my soul has been devoured
As my body crumbles, and my evil is empowered
All because of you….you fuckin coward
But why would you care, your life has not shattered
Now I spend every day with agonizing pain
Yankin shards of glass right out of my veins
Pealing skin that has already been slain
And those damn insects just drivin me insane
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"...the poems are good, and a credit to this site..." said the goblin
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fleamailman wrote:"...the poems are good, and a credit to this site..." said the goblin
Is this your first short post?
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My Short Poem.
Hi.
You aren't shy.
I like pie.
Why?
Hi.
You aren't shy.
I like pie.
Why?
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No, he made another one somewhere.JriderT wrote:fleamailman wrote:"...the poems are good, and a credit to this site..." said the goblin
Is this your first short post?
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To my childhood then:
A poem to a ghost
a memory nothing more
a boy upon the coast
a wind upon the shore
a promise upon that gust
as if the two of us
could swap (what we saw)
-fleamailman-
A poem to a ghost
a memory nothing more
a boy upon the coast
a wind upon the shore
a promise upon that gust
as if the two of us
could swap (what we saw)
-fleamailman-
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fleamailman wrote:To my childhood then:
A poem to a ghost
a memory nothing more
a boy upon the coast
a wind upon the shore
a promise upon that gust
as if the two of us
could swap (what we saw)
-fleamailman-
I thought the goblin said everything in your posts =O
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the goblin gives credit to the thread starter saying "...just ignore those that can't, it's "trump it or lump it" now..."
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HAHAHA. that pic made my day.
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Ha, shes really going at it xD
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